منتديات لغاتى التعليمية - ممكن تعبير باللغة الانجليزية

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ممكن تعبير باللغة الانجليزية من المواضيع الاربعة :
There should be compulsory school subjects. Students should be allowed to choose the subjects they want to study.
Schools don't prepare young people for life in the real world. There should be more discipline in schools.
ويكون التعبير مقسم الى أربع اقسام :
1)مقدمة 2) ضد الموضوع يكون 2 فقط 3) مع الموضوع يكون 2 فقط 4)الخاتمة
مثال:
Exams are a fair way of testing students. Do you agree?
1)every year thousands of students take important exams which can decide their future. For example, students have to pass exams with satisfactory grades in order to get a placein a university. However, are exams a fair way of judging student's ability?
2) on the one hand, exams seem fair. The guestions are the same for all students. Also, the exams are marked according to a strict scheme and usually by more than one examiner. Furthermore, students do the exams at the same time and under the same conditions.
3) on the other hand, there are some drawbacks with exams. Despite some students deserving to pass, they might be so nervous on the big day that they make a mess of the exam. Moreover, there may be other reasons, such as illness, which affect a student's performance in an exam. An alternative to exams would be a system of continuous assessment of course work by teachers during the year although this would mean more regular testing and more work for teachers. There would be a greater opportunity for students to copy work, too.
4) to sum up, exams are not the ideal way of testing students and the idea of assessing students' work over a longer period is becoming more popular. In my opinion, the best system would be a mixture of the two-50% exams and 50% course work.